MOONLIGHT ~ SHADOWCLAN

[moon]

I am starting over with characters. The only ones remaining are my mother and daughter pair, Purplestripe and Purplepaw. The others have lost my interest in rping and I believe I'll start over with my characters. Don't get mad. Those accounts shall be slowly deleted later as I begin to get my activity up. I have missed a lot I know, but not very much and i'm beginning to miss rping cats. So bare with me on those accounts that remain.


Other Accounts: Purplestripe and Purplepaw.
Ribbon(s): Both are gold
Character: Moonlight
Gender: Male
Clan: Shadowclan
Position: Warrior

Appearance: Moonlight may perhaps be a cat of the night. Or rather he would think so. He blends in with the dark surroundings at night with his gray striped coat. Moonlight has yellow green eyes that perhaps glow in the night while he's wandering around the marsh. He has plenty of different markings on his fur and colors. He not only has the main fur color of gray, but the secondary colors of his fur are perhaps a black, brown and a bit of while. He has a white chest with a bit of white on his muzzle a bit with a few stripes of brown running down it a bit. His tail on the other hand has black and gray stripes while his hind quarters have brown stripes that can be seen visible without any problems noticing.

Moonlight's size is a bit small for his age, but it gives him a bit of advantage of an attack. He is slim with a bit of meat on his bones. So he wouldn't exactly be called chubby for his size when he is very lithe in size and may have the better advantaged then his clan mates. His claws are perhaps somewhat sharp. They aren't pointy sharp as he doesn't wish to harm another cat so that cat may get deep wounds, but enough to make the cat leave him alone.

Personality: Moonlight may seem the quiet cat in the clan, but that is quite the opposite. He tends to be very loud, but he's not one to get in very much trouble. He enjoys being around others because he isn't fond of being by himself, but if he really has to be alone he'll put up with it and use his courage to get over his fear of being all alone. He enjoys watching what other clans think of him because of his small size, but at least he can prove that he's a warrior and not an apprentice. He isn't one to be fond of name calling just because he was the runt of his litter. He actually quite prefers it if people just leave him alone at times when he needs some alone time or when he just wants to think things through.

Moonlight just loves to have friends by his side. He isn't one to fight over something small, but at least he can have a friendly fight even if it means he proves his friends wrong about something. He would do anything for his friends and clan if it meant his life. Most of the time he just likes hanging out with others or going hunting making the most of everything that there is to do without trying to go into another clan's territory.

History: Moonlight was the runt of his litter of three kits. He had a sister and a brother, named Orangekit and Sunkit. Being born in Shadowclan they had all sorts of protection incase of an attack of sorts. HIs parents, Darkbelly and Oakstripe were very good about playing with their kits when they saw them bored. Moonlight had enjoyed that when he got to play with his father, Oakstripe rather than just sit in the nursery and sleep. He was very playful with his father at times, but was sad when Oakstripe had to go do his warrior duties to keep the clan safe.

During one night it was during leaf bare and Moonkit and his siblings were sleeping close to Darkbelly trying to stay warm when their was a yowl outside the nursery. A yowl, Moonkit didn't know and it made him feel scared. Of course he was the first one awake when it happened. He tried nudging his mother awake to get her up to see what it was, but he disappeared deeper into the nursery as he saw a dark shadow come into the nursery. He could hear the cries of his siblings as the shadow carried them. It had killed his mother on impact of a claw to her throat. Being the runt he had hid in the smallest space he could find in the nursery shaking and trying to keep quiet. When morning came the next day he could see Oakstripe mourning over the body of his mate and his kits. He thought he had lost all of them until Moonkit came out shaking. His father told him what had attacked the camp last night as he was one of the warriors to go after the fox that came and took his siblings away, but he didn't find them or rather he didn't find them alive. He found them, but they were dead before he could save them, but the warriors did managed to kill the fox before it made another rampage on them. Moonkit felt lonely days after his siblings and mother were buried. He had no one to play with and would always go bug his father to play with him or if he could sleep with him as he wasn't fond of the other queens in the nursery.

When Moonlight became an apprentice he was used to being alone, but he quickly gained some friends. Friends that didn't bother about his size or how many siblings he had. At least he had someone to hang with. There was one apprentice he really liked playing with, Hedgepaw. He was really fun and would always make the best out of something boring. He knew how to make someone feel happy and that's what Moonlight liked about the cat. He could make someone happy when they were feeling down. His apprenticeship went by fast or rather he thought it went by fast because he was actually enjoying it.

When he became a warrior he felt proud about himself, his father congratulated him before he went back to sleep. He was an elder now, his father. Moonlight thought about his mother and siblings and what it would be like if they had lived instead of running with the stars in Starclan. When he got his first apprentice, Stonepaw he made sure his apprentice knew everything. He was also very protective of the apprentice always making sure the cat wasn't doing anything mouse brain. Even though the apprentice was fairly his size he always made sure he was bigger than the cat so it looked like he wasn't the smaller of the two. He enjoyed Stonepaw's company from time to time, but was sadden by the cat's death when he was killed on the thunderpath while they were out walking near there to check the border. He wanted to make sure that any cat close to him that he would make sure were away from any danger, but he knew he couldn't protect anyone for very long. Yet that was his lifetime goal was to make sure everyone was safe even if it meant taking his own life to save them.

IC: Not Needed
Picture: Look In Sig
Code Words: Not Needed

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[silvercreek]

Purple! -Glomps-

Your bio looks great, but while I was reading it, I found some parts in all sections that didn't quite make sence. I'll give one example.

He blends in with the dark surrounds at night with his gray striped coat.

I pulled this out the appearance. I think you meant to say "surroundings" instead of "surrounds". There's a few other errors like this so I would just re-read your bio.

Other than that, I think your bio is great. I'll accept it once you fix what I told you. xD

[moon]

Alright fixed. And yes I did mean surroundings, but I guess I was tired when I was typing this up last night. Lol

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[silvercreek]

It happens to everyone. xD Accepted.