*BRITTLEBREEZE ~ SHADOWCLAN

[brittlebreeze ♠]

Other Accounts:

Smallclaw[smallclaw], Midnighthowl[midnighthowl], Wildtalon[smallpaw].

Ribbon(s):

Purple -- Brittlebreeze;
Purple -- Consolaty;
Gold -- Smallclaw.

Character:

Brittlebreeze.

Gender:

Tom.

Clan:

ShadowClan.

Position:

Medicine Cat.

Appearance:

Brittlebreeze is a tan short hair tom with numerous blotches of flame colored tabby coiling over his muscular body. He's faintly sinewy, hence his rippling power, but as time passes and he still grows he promises a strong healthy future as a full grown cat. His tail is longer than it should be by a few inches and his ears are their normal sizing, with ivory hairs and a ashen pastel pink on the inside. His paws are large and his hind legs would remind someone of a bobcats, wide and massive -- although even as muscular as he is, a lot or the whatnot, and wide, his figure is willowy; meaning he's more for running than battle. His eyes are a beautiful light icy blue, like the ocean on a bright sunny day just glimmering off in the horizon. He's large but he is more familiar with using his long legs as an advantage; rather than for strength, but despite his size he's lithe, and tall; giving him the ability to sprint quickly and/or take out his enemy, opponent or prey.

Personality:

Brittlebreeze can be very annoying sometimes with his over-confidence but most of the time his judgment to others and himself can be true, he would put himself into danger if only to save another cat, even if from a different Clan they're still the same species right? He has a strong will of determination but can be lowly and laid back on days where everything is boring and nothing will satisfy him. He wants to be helpful to his Clan and earn the respect of his past mentor and Clanmates, though that's what every cat wants.. It's his dream. Brittlebreeze is very outgoing, though maybe a few times he can be shy and hide away from view, he's a nice cat and can really pay attention and make sure you don't count him out of anything important, he enjoys the elders tales and listens well so he can repeat word for word to his friends and the older Warriors. Though sometimes, he's blinded to the rivalry and anger in things that he doesn't realize what exactly is going on; sort of a subconscious thing.

He doesn't have anymore family left, but he has many friends. Making him even more confident to keep them all alive. As for she-cats...he doesn't have any love interests. When his mother and father were alive, he loved them very much, and at that point he would have died for them. But now that they've gone, he's moving forward with his life, and working more on helping ShadowClan. He would surely give his life for his Clan, any way he could. And he would do so without hesitance. In battle, he keeps to the side lines. Only ever moving down to join in the blazing fray when it's necessary, so far it hasn't been. He's not keen on killing, but if he ever had to, he would definitely give his all to help his Clan mates.

History:

Kithood:

As a Kit, Brittlekit was normally the center of attention always being pestered by his friends on who would play the leading role in the games they normally enjoyed in. He never had to worry about being left out...lonely or ignored, after all, his mother was always around before then. But even though he was popular, inside he was like a water fall which shook and roared as it all rained down from a nice calm river. He was a very energetic kit and found himself into a lot of trouble by wandering out of the camp a couple times by his own sake of curiosity, and though he was young, he was brave and the punishment for being so was a little aggravating when his Apprentice ceremony came.

Apprentichood:

Everything had been great, his friends were happy, prey was plentiful and there seemed to be nothing wrong after his punishment passed {and it did so quickly}, but on the day of his Apprentice ceremony the camp was raided by another Clan and she fell victim to the death StarClan laid out for her, though he had his father around quite a bit the patrols needed him more than Brittlepaw did, and time began to move around, nothing ever seemed the same anymore. Though for wandering out of camp as a kit, he had to pay his consequences by tending to the elders for a good moon, maybe two and though he hated it more than ever he learned not to disobey orders and rules given to him by those at a higher rank or superiority.

IC:

In the dying rays of the sun, which cast long red streaks about the earth and through the trees Jaypaw knew what he would have to do, he could scent the faint breeze colder than the rest; which told him it was getting late. He wouldn't wimp out, he would go...and even if it meant finding out the true purpose in his existence, I have to be sure.. he thought, and while everyone was occupied he scrambled around the side of the Warriors den, where they made dirt most of the time. He could feel himself running through the trees quickly, heart pounding in his chest with the hidden fear of the truth he knew would be let loose this night; when he could feel coldness finding it's way into his pelt he could just barely hear the stream trickle, and in moments, which felt like forever he ran alongside the moorland grass, when the grass turned to rock he slowed his pace to a halt. "Alright.. Show me what you need to.." he mewed, imagining his dream and he could feel pelts brush against his right now too, settling down he put his nose into the Moonpool and as he fluttered he began to sleep.

He could see the forest again, bright and beautiful as it had been last time, he glanced around and could scent Cherry blossoms from an old sakura tree nearby, the rushing water of the river and the sounds of the forest prey scuffling about, he suddenly could see a shape padding through the undergrowth of the field of tall oats, and in moments Risingsong stepped out; her long golden pelt shining. "Greetings, Jaypaw" she mewed, her voice ever so sweet and soft and her eyes, they seemed like the heather which grew across gardens of flowers and herbs; after a moment of hesitation he replied; "Hi Risingsong; I need to know.." he began, but was interrupted by the medicine cat; "Your destiny? Yes, Jaypaw I know why you have come." Risingsong let loose a sigh and with a sweep of her tail she beckoned her grandson closer. "Well, What am I supposed to do? Alot of the clan believes I'm just useless and weak because I'm blind and the medicine cats and my mother.. They think I'd be better off a medicine cat." he mewed quietly, though his pale blue orbs blazed with fury at the thought of what everyone else believed to be true, and that Destiny couldn't be changed. The Medicine cat was quiet for a moment, before speaking.

"Jaypaw, You were born to be a medicine cat." Though her words were shocking and heart breaking he knew them very well, as everyone has already told him the same thing.. Your better off a Medicine cat or Have you ever considered becoming a Medicine cat? and now, he could no longer shake away the realizations of his future and his destiny, but he could put up a fight! "Become a Medicine cat? No! I want to be a Warrior like everyone else who is born, Like my sister!" he wailed, pale blue orbs glaring angrily, as much as being stubborn. But Risingsong was nor happy or sad, just challenging; her violet gaze thoughtful and understanding, but even if it was.. his destiny was his destiny. "Your not cut out like that! You were born to be a Medicine cat, even as much as you don't want to admit it, you know its true!"

"But it's not fair!" he protested, tears welding up behind his eyes, and with a sweep of her tail through the short silence she murmured; "Life cannot be fair, you can only follow the path they have given, precious.. It was not my favorite path either." he voice soothing him, as in moments hot steamy tears streamed down his muzzle. And he woke with a jolt, realizing he was crouched low near the Moonpool, the scent of mildew told him it was coming early, and yet again.. all he could see was the same dark abyss; hurrying to his paws he pelted back to camp.

Picture:

In my signature.

Code Words:

CORRECT.

[bayu]

The only thing I would do is lengthen your description a bit more and even your personality a bit. Tell us if Nibblepaw is agrresive/shy, mean/nice, rebllious/good listener, shy/outgoing. Just try to add more so people know the cat better. And if there are any more finer details you could add to the discription about what he looks like, it would be better. It sometimes helps if you look at the bios of current cats, to see what they haev and that your still missing.

=] -Bayu

[ello]

There is already a Nimblepaw in SC, roleplayed by Stipple ^^

[ashenkit]

Sorry, but you can only have two characters before you get a ribbon.

[brittlebreeze ♠]

I do only have two characters, I have Wildtalon but the username for it is Smallpaw.

Alright, I was wondering if there was a Nimblepaw or not but anyways now that i know there is one I'll change the name and re-make the Bio! ^^

Thank yoos Bayu, I'll keep all of that in mind.

[jayfeather]

Yup. There is a already a Nimblepaw in sc...

[brittlebreeze ♠]

Alright, just to be sure and not have the same problem I'll throw up a list of names below, and can anyone tell me who is already here, alright?

Briarpaw
Brittlepaw
Pepperpaw
Poppypaw
Harkpaw

[blizzardmyth]

Erm, I don't think that there are any cats in Shadowclan with those name beginnings.

:] My favorite one is Brittlepaw.

[brittlebreeze ♠]

Alright, I'm done and hopefully it's good now because I'm totally brain dead! O.-

[Hawkstar]

I would add a little more to History.

Love the picture though!

[smallpaw]

Yes, this is Brittlepaw too! ;D ^^

Thanks and give me a faint second to think on about that, alright Hawkeye?

BTW: Luff your siggie! <333

[Hawkstar]

Of course ^^

And thanks, I like Wildtalon's smaller pic xD

[smallpaw]

Erm.. Thanks! xD We're like starting a really tiny conversation here, O.o Alright I'll just get on with the History already. lol

[brittlebreeze ♠]

Done! ;D Hawkeye let me know if the History is still Bleh, I was totally Mucho-Grande brain dead. x.x

[Hawkstar]

That would be good enough -gives cookie-

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