THORNPAW ~ SHADOWCLAN [WIP]

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Thornpaw of ShadowClan

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Name: Thornpaw Thornclaw

Age: 6 Moons

Gender: Male

Clan: ShadowClan

Rank: Apprentice

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Reason For Name: He has a thing with getting thorns stuck in between his claws, and it's just an evilish name, which suits him because he's so snobby.

Previous Names: Thornkit

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One Sentence Description: Black tom with a white tail tip and hazel eyes

Appearance:
Pelt
Black is about the best thing to say. Thornpaw's pelt is jet black, and is usually stuffed with thorns. It's not a very tidy pelt, as he does not care much for it, and doesn't groom it very often. It's too bad too, because cats always told him he'd have the most shiney and glossy pelt in the clan if he took care of it.

Face
Like his pelt, Thornpaw's face is jet black. It's like any regular cat's face, good size, normal sized ears, fluffy whiskers, a good nose, normal cat shaped eyes. His teeth are kind of dull, but he tries to sharpen them on bones the odd time, but still, they're not very sharp. All in all, ther's not too much to say about his face. Really the only thing that's different about it is the fact that he has a tiny white spot right above his nose. Although, it's so small, it's barely visable.

Tail
Again, as everything, Thornpaw's tail is jet black. It's a tad bit longer than most cat's tails, but not by much, and it's not well groomed, like his pelt. Although, there is a white tip at the end of his tail. It's the only white on his whole body other than the tiny, hardly visable dot above his nose.

Legs and Paws
Thornpaw's legs are longer than most cats, like his tail. Some like to say that his legs are too tall, but really, there are other cats out there with longer legs... His are just longer than the averedge cat. His paws, on the other hand, are a bit smaller than most cats. Not so small that he looks weird, just a bit smaller, but still recognizable. His claws are long, and very sharp, as he sharpens them everyday.

Scars and Markings
Like most cats, from battle, Thornpaw has some scars... Well, one scar. He likes to say it was from battle, but it was really from battling a thorn when he was a kit, which gave him a nasty and deep cut. So he now has a scar on his front left pad, but of course, no one ever sees it because his pads are always on the ground.

Body Shape
Thornpaw has a very broad body, with big shoulders, and of course his long legs. Because of his long legs and broad body, his is quite tall. Although, because he is only an apprentice, he'll just keep growing. A good cat to compare him to for body shape is Tigerstar. Big, muscular, strong, tough. Thornpaw's weight could probably hold down a smal warrior. Don't forget that he' only an apprentice, so as he gets bigger, he'll be able to hold down bigger warriors with his body weight.

Overall
Overall, Thornpaw is jet black, he has a white tip on his tail, and is quite a big an tall cat. That's probably the best way to sum it up in one sentance, so there you go!

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Personality:
Mr. Perfect
Thornpaw is one of those cat's who things they're so perfect. He believes that he's the best cat in the clan, and trust me, he acts like it too. A lot of cats hat him for this. Sometimes he even complains that he's not the leader, because, according to himself, he'd do a much better job running the Clan.(Whatever) Of course he always talks quietly when talking about that, but still, he thinks he's the best fighter, hunter, instructor, apprentice, will be the best mentor, and so on. Although, he really isn't that good at hunting, so he just tells everyone that he simply doesn't like it, which is why he doesn't bring much prey back, because he doesn't try very hard.

Rude and Snobby
Thornpaw is by far one of the most rude and snobby cats in ShadowClan. He'll make fun of kits, which next to no cat does, and he'll even talk rude to his senior warriors and elders, which usually means he finds himself in trouble, and doing extra apprentice duties. Although, he does mind, when other apprentice's ask him why's he's in trouble, and has to do so many more apprentice duties, he always tells them that he's not in trouble, and wanted to be kind and give the other apprentices a day off, and do all of the chores himself. This way, of course, he makes himself sound better than all of the other apprentices.

Ladies Man
Thornpaw is a real ladies man, or so he tries to be. He talks to all of the she-cats, and tries to stir up a conversation. Although, as most of the cats hate him, most of them will just turn they're backs and walk away, but the odd cat will stay with hi. It's usually a cat with the same personality, but the only cat that he really does love, isn't one with a rude and snobby personality. His perfect cat is a smart, kind, and beautiful cat. When he finds the odd cat like that, he has a very hard time trying to talk to her, therefor he usually tries to avoid her.

The Hidden Side
Like every cat, there is a hint of good and kindness in Thornpaw, and as bad as he may seem, he is a loyal ShadowClan cat, and will protect his Clan and Clanmates at all costs. A lot of cats, especially kits, don't believe that there is any kindness or love in his heart, but, as hard as it may be to believe, there is some. Some cats believe that he just needs a loved one to bring it out, and that's probably what it is. Although, even if that bit of kindness does come out, he'd still usually have that same, snobby personality.

Likes:
*Battles
*Scratching Stuff
*Biting Stuff
*She-Cats

Dislikes:
*Hunting

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History:
Kit
As a kit, believe it or not, Thornkit was actually nice to his litter mates, and he was a very friendly and helpful little kit. He would help the warrior move stuff around, and patch up the dens when needed. Everyone though he would grow up to be an amazing warrior, and one of the nicest ones, maybe even so good, he would be made deputy. Of course, that didn't happen.
I'll finish this up later... I want to get a plot going with him, so a litter mate or two, maybe some parents...

Apprentice
Honestly, there's next to nothing for his history of being an apprentice, as this is only his second day. Although, the very first thing he did after becoming an apprentice, was sneak out of he camp, and go adventure. He was an apprentice, so he couldn't get in that much trouble. He was back before evening, and no one had noticed his absence. Then the usual sleep at night, and a dream about his perfect mate, yada, yada, yada, until today, his very secon day of being an apprentice.

IC Example: Not Needed

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Other Characters: Silverwolf(ThunderClan), Rainpaw(RiverClan), Frostpaw(WindClan)